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โœ๏ธ ์‹ค์ „ ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ – ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ๋†’์ด๋Š” ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋Š”?

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์‹ค์ „ ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ

๐Ÿ˜ฑ ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์จ์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ง‰๋ง‰ํ•˜์…จ๋‚˜์š”? ์ €๋„ ์ฒ˜์Œ์—” ์™„์ „ ํ—ค๋งธ์–ด์š”... ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ง€๋‚œ 6๊ฐœ์›”๊ฐ„ 17๊ฐœ๊ตญ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์™€ ์ง์ ‘ ํ˜‘์ƒํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๊นจ๋‹ฌ์€ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์ „๋žต๋“ค์„ ์ด๋ฒˆ ๊ธ€์— ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋‹ด์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! โœ๏ธ ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ ์ž‘์„ฑ๋ฒ•๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ, ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ํ˜‘์ƒ ๋…ธํ•˜์šฐ๊นŒ์ง€! ์ด ๊ธ€์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์‹ค์ „ ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ์˜ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•ด๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๊ณ  ๊ณ„์•ฝ ์„ฑ์‚ฌ์œจ์„ ๋†’์ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด? ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ํ™•์ธํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ”ฅ

๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ์˜ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ๊ตฌ์กฐ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ

1. ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ๋ž€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€?

๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ(trade negotiation letter)๋Š” ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์™€์˜ ๊ฑฐ๋ž˜ ์กฐ๊ฑด, ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ, ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ, ์ˆ˜๋Ÿ‰ ๋“ฑ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ ์ธ ์ƒ์—… ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธ์„œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹จ์ˆœํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์ œ์•ˆ์„œ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹Œ, ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋ฅผ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜์œผ๋กœ ํ˜‘์ƒ์„ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๊ฐ€๋Š” ์ „๋žต์  ๋ฌธ์„œ๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉ๋˜์–ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ฃ . ๐Ÿ˜Ž

2. ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ ํ•„์ˆ˜ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ์š”์†Œ

ํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ์—๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ํฌํ•จ๋˜์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ํ•ญ๋ชฉ๋“ค์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง → ๊ฑฐ๋ž˜์กฐ๊ฑด ์ œ์‹œ → ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ์ž๋ฃŒ ์ œ์‹œ → ์ œ์•ˆ ๋‚ด์šฉ ์š”์•ฝ → ํ˜‘์ƒ ์—ฌ์ง€ ํ‘œํ˜„์˜ ์ˆœ์„œ๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ๊ฐ ๋ฌธ๋‹จ๋งˆ๋‹ค ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ์™€ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋‹ด๊ฒจ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํด๋Ÿฌ์Šคํ„ฐ ์ฃผ์ œ์ธ '๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์กฐ๊ฑด ๋ช…์‹œ', '๋ฐฐ์†ก์กฐ๊ฑด ๋ช…ํ™•ํ™”' ๋“ฑ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์š”์†Œ๋ฅผ ๋น ๋œจ๋ ค์„  ์•ˆ ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿง

3. ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ์˜ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ์›์น™

๋‹จ์–ด ์„ ํƒ์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง์ ‘์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋˜, ๊ณต๊ฒฉ์ ์ธ ์–ด์กฐ๋Š” ํ”ผํ•˜๊ณ  ํ˜‘์กฐ์ ์ธ ๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์กฐ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ: "We hope to reach a mutually beneficial agreement." ์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ์งง๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ, ๋ฌธ๋‹จ์€ 2~3๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋‚ด๋กœ ๊ตฌ์„ฑํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์˜ ๊ฐ€๋…์„ฑ๋„ ์˜ฌ๋ผ๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ’ก

๋ฌด์—ญ์‹ค์ „ ์ž…๋ฌธ ๐Ÿ“„
ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๊ฐœ๋… ์„ค๋ช…
๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ ์ •์˜ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์™€์˜ ๊ฑฐ๋ž˜์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ์ œ์•ˆํ•˜๊ณ  ์กฐ์œจํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฌธ์„œ๋กœ, ์ „๋žต์  ์„ค๋“ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋จ
ํ•„์ˆ˜ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ์š”์†Œ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง, ์ œ์•ˆ ์กฐ๊ฑด, ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ/๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ/์ˆ˜๋Ÿ‰ ์กฐ๊ฑด, ์ œ์•ˆ ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ, ํ˜‘์ƒ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ ํฌํ•จ
๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ๋ฒ• ์ง์ ‘์ ์ด๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๋˜, ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ์˜ ํ˜‘์กฐ์  ํ‘œํ˜„ ์‚ฌ์šฉ

์‹ค์ „ ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ

์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ ์ž‘์„ฑ์˜ ๊ธฐ์ˆ 

1. ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋ฅผ ์ฃผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„ ์„ ํƒ

๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์—์„œ ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ์€ ์‹ ๋ขฐ์—์„œ ์‹œ์ž‘๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. “Based on our long-standing experience in the Asian market…” ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด ์‹ค์ œ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๋ฉด ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋„๊ฐ€ ๋†’์•„์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ” ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๊ฐ€ '๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์ œ์•ˆ์ด ์•ˆ์ „ํ•˜๋‹ค'๊ณ  ๋А๋ผ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์•ผ ํ˜‘์ƒ๋ ฅ์ด ์ƒ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ๋น„๊ต์™€ ์ˆ˜์น˜๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•œ ์„ค๋“

๋‹จ์ˆœํ•œ “good quality” ๋Œ€์‹  “ISO 9001 ์ธ์ฆ ํš๋“, ์ž‘๋…„ 3๋งŒ ๊ฑด ์ด์ƒ ์ถœํ•˜ ๊ฒฝํ—˜”์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๊ฐ๊ด€์  ์ˆ˜์น˜์™€ ๋น„๊ต์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ํฌํ•จํ•˜๋ฉด ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ์ด ๋ฐฐ๊ฐ€๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿค“ ํด๋Ÿฌ์Šคํ„ฐ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ์ธ ‘ํ•ด์™ธ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜ ์ „๋žต’๊ณผ๋„ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. ํ˜‘์ƒ ์—ฌ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ

“We are open to further discussion based on your volume commitment.” ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์กฐ๊ฑด๋ถ€ ์œ ์—ฐ์„ฑ์„ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ๊ฐ•์••์ ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์—๊ฒŒ ์„ ํƒ๊ถŒ์„ ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ‘ ํ˜‘์ƒ์˜ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ์„ ์—ฌ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์‹ ๋ขฐ์™€ ์œ ์—ฐํ•จ์„ ๋ชจ๋‘ ์ „ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋ฌด์—ญ์‹ค์ „ ์ž…๋ฌธ ๐Ÿ“„
ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๊ฐœ๋… ์„ค๋ช…
์‹ ๋ขฐ ํ‘œํ˜„ ์‹ค์ œ ๊ฒฝํ—˜๊ณผ ์‚ฌ๋ก€ ์–ธ๊ธ‰์œผ๋กœ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ ํ˜•์„ฑ
์ˆ˜์น˜·๋น„๊ต ํ™œ์šฉ ์ˆ˜์น˜ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜ ์„ค๋ช…์œผ๋กœ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์„ฑ๊ณผ ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ๊ฐ•ํ™”
ํ˜‘์ƒ ์—ฌ์ง€ ํ‘œํ˜„ ์กฐ๊ฑด๋ถ€ ์œ ์—ฐ์„ฑ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ ๋ถ€์—ฌ

์‹ค์ „ ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ

๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ๋งž์ถคํ˜• ํ˜‘์ƒ ์ „๋žต

1. ๊ตญ๊ฐ€๋ณ„ ํ˜‘์ƒ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ ์ดํ•ด

์ค‘๊ตญ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๋Š” ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์— ๋ฏผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ , ์ผ๋ณธ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ์™€ ํ’ˆ์งˆ์„ ์ค‘์‹œํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์œ ๋Ÿฝ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๋Š” ์กฐ๊ฑด์˜ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์„ฑ๊ณผ ๋ฒ•์  ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์ฃ . ๐Ÿค ํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ๋Š” ๋‹จ์ผ ํฌ๋งท์ด ์•„๋‹Œ, ๊ตญ๊ฐ€ ํŠน์„ฑ์„ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ•œ ๋งž์ถคํ˜• ์ „๋žต์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์˜ ๊ตฌ๋งค ๋ชฉ์  ๋ถ„์„

๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žฌํŒ๋งค๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋Œ€๋Ÿ‰๊ตฌ๋งค์ž์ธ์ง€, ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ๋‚ฉํ’ˆ์šฉ์ธ์ง€์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ˜‘์ƒ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋„ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ์ ธ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ’ฌ ์˜ˆ: “This quote includes a 5% volume discount if over 1,000 units.” ์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. ๋งž์ถคํ˜• ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋กœ ์‹ ๋ขฐ ์œ ๋„

๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ๊ตฌ๋งค ์ด๋ ฅ์„ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜, ์ด์ „ ์ƒ๋‹ด ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ•œ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋Š” “๋‹น์‹ ๋งŒ์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ œ์•ˆ”์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋А๊ปด์ง€๊ฒŒ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ˜ “As per our discussion during the Canton Fair, here is the revised offer.”๋Š” ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ์ง‘์ค‘์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ๊ฐœ๋… ์„ค๋ช…
๊ตญ๊ฐ€๋ณ„ ํŠน์„ฑ ๋ฐ˜์˜ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ๊ตญ์ ์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅธ ํ˜‘์ƒ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ ํŒŒ์•… ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ ์กฐ์ •
๊ตฌ๋งค ๋ชฉ์  ๋ถ„์„ ๋Œ€๋Ÿ‰๊ตฌ๋งค, OEM, ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ์š”์ฒญ ๋“ฑ ๋ชฉ์ ์— ๋งž์ถ˜ ์กฐ๊ฑด ์ œ์‹œ
๋งž์ถคํ˜• ์ ‘๊ทผ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ๊ฒฝํ—˜ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜ ๋ฉ”์‹œ์ง€๋กœ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋„์™€ ๋ฐ˜์‘๋„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ

์‹ค์ œ ์‚ฌ๋ก€๋กœ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ํ˜‘์ƒ ๋ฌธ์„œ

1. A์‚ฌ: ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์กฐ์ • ์„ฑ๊ณต ์‚ฌ๋ก€

2024๋…„, ํ•œ๊ตญ์˜ ํ•œ ์ „์ž๋ถ€ํ’ˆ ์ˆ˜์ถœ์—…์ฒด A์‚ฌ๋Š” ์œ ๋Ÿฝ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์—๊ฒŒ ์ตœ์ดˆ ์ œ์‹œํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ฐ€๋ณด๋‹ค 8% ๋†’์€ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์œผ๋กœ ๊ณ„์•ฝ์„ ์ฒด๊ฒฐํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐ŸŽฏ ๋น„๊ฒฐ์€ ํ’ˆ์งˆ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธ ์„ฑ์ ์„œ ์ฒจ๋ถ€์™€ ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋•๋ถ„์ด์—ˆ์ฃ . “This price reflects our latest RoHS-compliant upgrade and low defect ratio (0.2%).”

2. B์‚ฌ: ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ํ˜‘์ƒ ์‹คํŒจ ์‚ฌ๋ก€

๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ B์‚ฌ๋Š” ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์™€์˜ ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ํ˜‘์ƒ์—์„œ “Our standard delivery time is 45~60 days.”๋งŒ์„ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜๋‹ค๊ฐ€, ๊ฑฐ๋ž˜๋ฅผ ์„ฑ์‚ฌ์‹œํ‚ค์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ˜ฅ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ๋งˆ๊ฐ์ผ์— ๋ฏผ๊ฐํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ๊ทธ ์ ์„ ๊ฐ„๊ณผํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด์ฃ . ํด๋Ÿฌ์Šคํ„ฐ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ ์ค‘ ‘๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ๋ช…์‹œ์˜ ์ค‘์š”์„ฑ’์ด ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋ก€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. C์‚ฌ: ํ˜‘์ƒ๋ ฅ ๊ฐ•ํ™” ์ „๋žต

C์‚ฌ๋Š” ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒฝ์Ÿ์‚ฌ์™€ ํ˜‘์˜ ์ค‘์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค์„ ์•Œ๊ณ , ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ „๋žต์  ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. “Compared to similar offers in the market, we guarantee a 10% longer warranty and full inspection before shipment.” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š”? ๊ฒฝ์Ÿ์‚ฌ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋ฌผ๋Ÿ‰์„ ์ˆ˜์ฃผํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ๐Ÿ’ช

์‚ฌ๋ก€ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์ „๋žต
A์‚ฌ (์„ฑ๊ณต) ๊ฐ๊ด€์  ์ˆ˜์น˜์™€ ์ธ์ฆ ๊ทผ๊ฑฐ๋กœ ๊ณ ๊ฐ€ ์ˆ˜์šฉ ์œ ๋„
B์‚ฌ (์‹คํŒจ) ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ๋‹ˆ์ฆˆ ๋ฐ˜์˜ ๋ถ€์กฑ, ์œ ์—ฐ์„ฑ ์—†๋Š” ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ์ œ์•ˆ
C์‚ฌ (์„ฑ๊ณต) ๊ฒฝ์Ÿ์‚ฌ ๋ถ„์„ ๊ธฐ๋ฐ˜ ์ฐจ๋ณ„ํ™” ์กฐ๊ฑด ์ œ์‹œ

ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ๋ฌด์—ญ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ ์ž‘์„ฑ๋ฒ•

1. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ œ๋ชฉ์€ ์Šน๋ถ€์ฒ˜

“Quotation for LED Panel (MOQ 500 units) – Fast Shipping Available”์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ์ œ๋ชฉ์€ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ๋ฅผ ๋‹ด๊ณ  ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋Œ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ˜Ž ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๋Š” ํ•˜๋ฃจ์— ์ˆ˜์‹ญ ํ†ต์˜ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—, ํด๋ฆญ ์œ ๋„ํ˜• ์ œ๋ชฉ์ด ํ•„์ˆ˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ 3๋‹จ๊ณ„

โ‘  ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง๊ณผ ๊ฐ„๋žตํ•œ ์ž๊ธฐ์†Œ๊ฐœ → โ‘ก ์ œ์•ˆ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์š”์•ฝ → โ‘ข ์ฒจ๋ถ€ ์•ˆ๋‚ด ๋ฐ ๋‹ต๋ณ€ ์š”์ฒญ. ์ด 3๋‹จ๊ณ„๋Š” ๋น ์ง์—†์ด ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํด๋Ÿฌ์Šคํ„ฐ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ ‘์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ํ…œํ”Œ๋ฆฟ ์‹ค์ „ ์˜ˆ์‹œ’์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๊ฐ•์กฐ๋˜๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด์ฃ . ๐Ÿ‘

3. ์‘๋‹ต ์œ ๋„ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ ์‚ฝ์ž…

์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋ง๋ฏธ์—๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ “Please kindly let us know your feedback by this Friday”์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ผ์ •ํ•œ ๊ธฐํ•œ์„ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ํ•œ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ“ฉ ๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์•„๋‹Œ, ์‘๋‹ต์„ ์œ ๋„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ตฌ์กฐ๊ฐ€ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ•ต์‹ฌ ํฌ์ธํŠธ ์„ค๋ช…
์ œ๋ชฉ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋Œ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ํ‚ค์›Œ๋“œ ํฌํ•จ, ๊ตฌ์กฐ์  ์ œ๋ชฉ
๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ 3๋‹จ๊ณ„ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ: ์ธ์‚ฌ → ์ œ์•ˆ ์š”์•ฝ → ๋‹ต๋ณ€ ์š”์ฒญ
์‘๋‹ต ์œ ๋„ ๊ธฐํ•œ ์–ธ๊ธ‰ ํฌํ•จํ•œ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์š”์ฒญ์œผ๋กœ ์‘๋‹ต๋ฅ  ์ฆ๊ฐ€

์ž์ฃผ ๋ฌป๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ

Q1. ๋ฌด์—ญํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ๋Š” ๊ผญ ์ •ํ•ด์ง„ ํฌ๋งท๋Œ€๋กœ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋‚˜์š”?

A. ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํฌ๋งท๋ณด๋‹ค ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ํ๋ฆ„๊ณผ ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ƒํ™ฉ๊ณผ ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ํŠน์„ฑ์— ๋งž๊ฒŒ ์กฐ์ ˆํ•˜๋Š” ์œ ์—ฐ์„ฑ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q2. ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์„ ๋จผ์ € ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์„๊นŒ์š”?

A. ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๊ฐ€ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ œํ’ˆ ๊ฐ€์น˜์™€ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ๋จผ์ € ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜๊ณ , ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์— ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q3. ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ๋งŒ ๋ฌป๊ณ  ์‘๋‹ต์ด ์—†์„ ๋•Œ ๋Œ€์ฒ˜ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€?

A. ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์™ธ์—๋„ ํ’ˆ์งˆ ์ธ์ฆ์„œ, ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ์•ˆ์ •์„ฑ, ์„œ๋น„์Šค ์ด์ ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•œ ๋ฆฌ๋งˆ์ธ๋“œ ๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q4. ๋ฐ”์ด์–ด ๊ตญ๊ฐ€์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ํ˜‘์ƒ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋„ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ์•ผ ํ•˜๋‚˜์š”?

A. ์˜ˆ. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์€ ์ง์ ‘์  ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•˜๊ณ , ์ผ๋ณธ์€ ๊ฐ„์ ‘์  ํ‘œํ˜„๊ณผ ๊ฒธ์†ํ•œ ์–ดํˆฌ๋ฅผ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q5. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์—์„œ ํ˜‘์ƒ์„œ๋ฅผ ์ฒจ๋ถ€ํ•  ๋•Œ ์œ ์˜ํ•  ์ ์€?

A. ํŒŒ์ผ๋ช…์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ค์ •ํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ํŒŒ์ผ ๋‚ด ๋‚ ์งœ์™€ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋ช…์ด ์ •ํ™•ํžˆ ๊ธฐ์žฌ๋˜์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q6. ํ˜‘์ƒ ์ค‘ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ์ธํ•˜ ์š”์ฒญ์ด ์™”์„ ๋•Œ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋Œ€์‘ํ•˜๋‚˜์š”?

A. ๋‹จ์ˆœ ์ธํ•˜๋ณด๋‹จ ๋Œ€๋Ÿ‰ ์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์‹œ ํ• ์ธ, ๋‚ฉ๊ธฐ ๋‹จ์ถ• ์กฐ๊ฑด ๋“ฑ์˜ ํŠธ๋ ˆ์ด๋“œ์˜คํ”„ ์ œ์‹œ๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Q7. ํ˜‘์ƒ ์ข…๋ฃŒ ํ›„์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋กœ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋‚˜์š”?

A. “We look forward to establishing a long-term business relationship with your esteemed company.”์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ธ์ •์  ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

 

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